標題: A daily record about me & Eureka's Adventure [列印本頁] 作者: 逸森 時間: 07-9-12 21:33 標題: A daily record about me & Eureka's Adventure in English is ok ? just for practicing.
nowadays,our English teacher suggested that use English to keep a diary is very useful to improve English,
but i don't like to keep a diary.then i think College Entrance Examination (call it short for CEE)will compete the capacity of composition,it's a good chance to keep a intersting daily record of adventure when i happen h-ave time.
Saying fore,my English compositing is worse comtrast the common in senior high schools.most of vocabulary i use is looked up in dictionary,so please let me have a space to use my bad English follow dates,ok?^^
master soking 、miss laiya,i write it in English,is ok?
nowadays,our English teacher suggested that using English to keep a diary is very useful to improve English,
but i don't like to keep a diary. i think College Entrance Examination (call it short for CEE)will compete the capacity of composition,it's a good idea to keep a intersting daily record of adventure when i happen have time.
My English compositing is worse contrast to the common in senior high schools and most of vocabulary i use is from in dictionary,so please let me have a space to use my poor English follow days,ok?^^
[ 本文最後由 逸森 於 07-9-15 09:55 AM 編輯 ]作者: 行醫救人 時間: 07-9-12 21:57
If you can , just do it
If you can't , just think it作者: 逸森 時間: 07-9-12 23:07 標題: Tumble into a strange realm.why are we in the tower! Eureka went upstairs with me now.we had gotten along inthis tower for three days.the tower was still surronded us that we couldn't exit here!
the trap maked us need to be more careful.Eureka looked tired even more.
"Eureka,you really need to have a rest.let's stop walking and gasp for a while,shall we?"i sympathise her,but when i looked at her face,firm expresss told me she would still walk in effort.
"hey......"i try make she take notice at me then she turn her head to face me.
A purple pair of eyes is unique.In my look,waht adorable it is!
Then gentle word with a little pant,"well...,ok,let's have a rest.thanks,Yison"
she stop walking then i support her with hands.
"minor matter,the condition of you is more important!"i said and consoled her,"That is ok,we would can't leave here immediately anyhow......"
"not false..."
It seemed that we would be surrounded for a lond time,
"Yison,sorry......i'm a little dizzy now."she said on my bosom.
i thought it's more important to keep the physical strength.
"so.....it's better taking a rest,Eureka?"
"......ok"
Suddenly,i found that Eureka facial expression is deathy pale.
"I'll look after you,set your mind at rest,good dream!"
"Umm...Yison,won't you take a rest?"
"Don't worry......"i refused,but she held my hand,
"Oh,you are lying.you are tired,too.don't worry about enemy,we haven't even meet an other person so far.so,don't push with a singe pole ,right?"
"right."so,i agreed.
Finally,we leaned on the wall of the tower together,holding each other,then going to sleep.
Eureka went upstairs with me. we had gotten along in this tower for three days. The tower still surrounds us that we can't exit!
the trap made us more cautious.Eureka looked tired even more.
"Eureka,you really need to have a rest, let's stop walking and gasp for a while,shall we?"i sympathised. however when i looked at her face,the firm expresss told me she would still walk in effort.
"Hey......"i tried to get her attention towards me. Then she turn her head to face me.
The pair of purple eyes is unique.In my view, how adorable it is!
Then in gentle word with a little pant,"well...,ok,let's have a rest.thanks,Yison"
she stop walking then i support her with hands.
"your condition is more important!"i said and consoled her,"That is ok,we can't leave here immediately anyhow......"
"not false..."
It seemed that we would be trapped for a long time,
"Yison,sorry......i'm a little dizzy now."she said on my bosom. (O.o) say what!!!
i thought it's more important to keep the physical strength.
".....it's better taking a rest,Eureka?"
"......ok"
Suddenly,i found that Eureka facial expression is in a deadly pale.
"I'll look after you,set your mind at rest,good dream!"
"Umm...Yison,won't you take a rest?"
"Don't worry......"i refused,but she held my hand,
"Oh,you are lying.you are tired,too.don't worry about enemy,we haven't even meet an other person so far.so,don't push with a single pole ,right?"
"right."so,i agreed.
Finally,we leaned on the wall of the tower together,holding each other,then going to sleep.
Don't worry... be happy~ 抱歉~自 high了一下~
不過大大可放心我們英文版不會咬人的~(謎:沒狗怎麼會有人被咬~
neways 歡迎妳來這裡繼續寫~在下會當你的觀眾的喔
PS.據說在下的第一本小說快完成了:p作者: caz 時間: 07-9-13 17:31
I think you've done a gr8 job!!
Good luck & keep it going ;P作者: Katliang 時間: 07-9-13 22:19
恩...勇氣可加~
但是大大要注意一下~不是每個句子中翻英就好
而且也要注意一下自己的標點符號作者: 逸森 時間: 07-9-15 17:50 標題: THE EXPLIAN ("DAILY" OR "WEEKLY"?) As i said "it's a good wise to keep a intersting daily record of adventure when i happen to have time."
so i may can't to keep the daily record of adventure,the "daily" is only a common usage.= =
so......don't expect that i can keep it daily.but i would write if i happen to have time.
maybe once a week for it......
by the way,i love to do it a lot while i thank gamez master of English board for correcting.^^
As i said "It's wise to keep an intersting daily record of adventure when i happen to have the time."
However i may not be able to keep the daily record of adventure because the "daily" is only a common usage.= =
So......don't expect that i can keep it daily, but i would write if i have time.
Maybe once a week for it......by the way, I love to do it a lot while I thank gamez master of English board for correcting.^^
大大要注意一下大寫喔~A good way to learn English is to practice, however if you practice it the wrong way, you can't expect yourself to get better. Best of luck~
PS. You're welcome
[ 本文最後由 Katliang 於 07-9-15 05:19 AM 編輯 ]作者: Katliang 時間: 07-9-15 21:20
The errors in red are the areas you may wish to work on.