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Q:請介紹一則令你印象深刻的廣告,第一段描述該廣告內容,第二段說明該廣告令你印象深刻的原因。


           Advertisement can be found everywhere nowdays.Since TV was invented,the
various ad had created more and more.I like watch TV and watch ad as well.Just
recently,I remember a related fruit ad what does impress me I have ever saw.The
ad's title is kiwi friut,describing a man  dress as kiwi fruit sing''Wake up!Wake up!
Eating me before you energy fade away.I will give you much erengy......''It is so funny
that I want to eat it.
          Although the advertisement content very simple,it bring strong impression to
me.The ad's music too amusing to forget it.It is always evoke me to memorize the
kiwi friut advertisement.Even though is a short music,it probably attracts many people
to pay attention.





希望各位可以幫我糾正一下!!
謝謝大家!!
Thank you!
 
各位的熱心幫忙!!
令在下感動的淚水直流、鼻涕狂噴、鼻屎狂生。
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你的文法有待加強喔~
你有很多自打錯~ 而且過去式跟現代式太混亂了

以下我會幫你做修改一次~ 然後我自己會寫另外一篇讓你做參考
Advertisements can be found everywhere nowdays.Since TV was invented,the
various ads had been created more and more.I like watch TV and watch ad as well.Just
recently,I remember a related fruit ad. The ad's title is kiwi fruit,describing a man  dressed
as kiwi fruit sing''Wake up!Wake up! Eating me before your energy fade away.I will give you much energy......''
It is so funny that I want to eat it.
          Although the advertisement's content was very simple,it brought a strong impression to
me.The ad's music was too amusing to forget .It always evokes me to memorize the
kiwi friut advertisement.Even though it was a short music,it probably attracted many people's attention.

The world of advertisement as we know it has been known throughout the world in its various way.  Since the time of
television was invented, more and more relentless advertisments are brought out to the world in its unique way. I remembered an
advertisement that i saw on TV, that made me hard to forget its content and urge that made me paid most of my attentions.
The advertisment, Kiwi Fruit, regarded a man dressed in a kiwi suit singing " Wake up! Wake up! Eathing me before your energy
fade away.  I will give you much energy...." To me the advertisement is a blast, for it made my want to eat it with joy.
      Although the advertisment's content wasn't very complex, it brought a strong impression to me.  The music, the comedy, and
layout content, made it impossible for me to forget.  Thinking back to the content, always gives me the urge to have another kiwi.
The advertisement may be short in its own little ways, but I believe that it attracted many people's attention just as it had
attracted mine.
 
四季有趴趴熊就好了
有控來英文版喔

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