活動~翻譯

Katliang

看到別的版裡都有活動~總覺得這裡也需要一個活動
所以在下有個蠻有趣的活動給大家~這個活動很簡單~不過有點難度
題目: 從你們最喜歡的歌手裡找他們最美的一首歌~然後翻譯
除了翻譯之外~由於我之前有教大家如何分解詩的意思~大大們還要告訴我這首歌的意義
例外: 除了迪士尼的音樂之外~因為大部分已經被翻譯了~其他的音樂都可以

翻譯好得人: 可從我這得一分
解釋好的人: 可從我這得一分

****** 這事讓大家分展現自己的英文程度~還可順便讓別人學習

Katliang

Ok, i'll do it...
skipping all those steps: Going straight to the main point~
The "Song"  poetry is about the view of a girl who has just broken up with her boyfriend.  The author, or Composer, in this case gives out the message that even though there are rough times in life, we, in general, should held our heads up high to make it through the troubles; the rain in this case is the sorrow and pain.
Through the rain - By Mariah Carey
When you get caught in the rain,          ...當你被困在雨中之時
With nowhere to run,                          ...找不到任何出路
When you're distraught and in pain,      
Without anyone.                                ...當妳獨個兒感到混亂和痛苦的時候
When you keep crying to be saved,
But nobody comes,                            ...當你不停叫喊求助, 卻沒人願意伸出援手時
And you feel so far away,                   ...你感到身在遙遠之處
That you just can't...                          ...已不能找到

Find your way home.                           ...回家的路
You can get there alone.                     ...你可以去到的
It's okay.                                          ...沒有問題的
What you say is...                              ...你要說的是...

#REPEAT#
I can make it through the rain.              ...我可以走過這片雨天
I can stand up once again.                  
On my own. And I know,                      ...我可以靠自己再次站起來, 而且我知道
That I'm strong enough to mend.          ...我夠堅強, 定能癒合.
And everytime I feel afraid,                   ...每次當我感到害怕時
I hold tighter to my faith.                     ...我更抓緊自己的信念
And I live one more day,                       ...所以我多活一天
And I make it through the rain.              ...所以我能走出了雨天

And if you keep falling down,                ...而如果你不停地下墮
Don't you dare give in.                         ...你千萬不能退後讓步
You will arise, safe and sound.              ...你會高飛, 平穩而響亮
So keep pressing...                             ...所以請努力以赴

On steadfastly,                                   ...堅定不移
And you'll find what you need,               ...你便能找到自己所要的
To prevail.                                         ...為得到勝利
What you say is...                               ...你要說的是...

#REPEAT#

And when the wind blows,                    ...當風吹的時候
And shadows grow close,                     ...黑影漸漸迫近
Don't be afraid.                                  ...別害怕
There's nothing you can't face.             ...沒有任何事你是不能面對的
And should they tell you,                     ...若果他們告訴你
You'll never pull through,                      ...你沒可能捱得過去
Don't hesitate.                                  ...不要猶豫
Stand tall and say...                           ...站起來說出來...

#REPEAT#

And I can make it through the rain,       ...我定可以走出這片雨天
And stand up once again.                    ...定可以再次站起來
And I'll live one more day,                    ...所以我多活一天
And I, I can make it through the rain.    ...所以我, 我可以走出這片雨天
Oh yes, you can.                               ...當然, 你也可以.
You're gonna make it through the rain.   ...你也會走峴這片雨天的

rutty0222

--I BELIEVE MY HEART--

主唱是團體BackstreetBoys（但我喜歡唐肯（Doucan)和另一女孩（忘了名子）翻唱的)
有點老的歌了（汗
主要是因為我非常非常喜歡它的旋律和歌聲啦


［Doucan］
Whenever I see your face the world disappears,
每當我瞧見妳,世界中就只有妳一人
All in a single glance so revealing.
全在這急遽一眼中透露
You smile and I feel as though I've know you for years.
在妳微笑我深覺彷彿認識你已久
How do I know to trust what I'm feeling?
我該如何相信我的直覺？
I believe my heart,
我相信我的心之外
What else can I do?
還能做什麼呢？
When every part of every thought leads me straight to you.
當每份思緒中每個細節引導我直向妳去
I believe my heart.
相信我的心之外
There's no other choice,
沒有其他的選擇
For now whenever my heart speaks, I can only hear your voice
現在每當我心訴說，只能聽見妳的聲音

[女生部分]
The life-time before we met has faded away.
我們相遇前的生命已經走逝
How did I live a moment without you?
沒有你的一刻我該如何活下去？
You don't have to speak at all, I know what you'd say.
一點都不消示意，我知道你想說什麼
And I know every secret about you.
知道關於你的每個秘密
I believe my heart.
我相信我的心
It believes in you.
而它相信你
It's telling me that what I see is completely true.
它告訴我我所見的　都是貨真價實的
I believe my heart.
我相信我的心
How can it be wrong?
它絕對不會錯
It says that what I feel for you I will feel my whole life long.
它告訴我對你的愛將一生不毀


[合]
I believe my heart.
我相信我的心
It believes in you
而它相信你
It's telling me that what I see is completely true.
它告訴我我所見的　都是貨真價實的
And with all my soul
伴與著我全部的靈魂
I believe my heart.
我相信我的心靈
The portrait that it paints of you is a perfect work of art
它描繪出的你的燦影　是完美漫妙的藝術傑作
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
相信大家都很容易看出，這就是兩情相願的情歌～
是當兩個人彼此，終於真正發現並認定了那就是另一半的時候。
那種感覺是很維美的，不可思議的，就是從來都不曾體會過的難以言喻。
用簡簡單單的言語表達對彼此的真意。

（玩玩看:P..........賞析要用英文打嗎)

[ 本文最後由 rutty0222 於 06-12-16 03:49 PM 編輯 ]

artifact

原文由Katliang 於 06-12-15 10:24 AM 發表
to 秋颯  是的什麼歌都可以~除了以上的例外
to warrust like wat artifact did is fine, but translating the meaning requires u to read 1 of my prevous posts

Oh my god... I've read that essay and I have to say...

I give up *laugh*

I can translate but I hate doing analysis... It arouses the NiGhTmaRe I had in my old days in Hong Kong doing all those Chinese Reading Exams (NoNoNO!!!!!) *blah* Sorry for not fulfilling the target... *sob*

Katliang

to 秋颯  是的什麼歌都可以~除了以上的例外
to warrust like wat artifact did is fine, but translating the meaning requires u to read 1 of my prevous posts

warrust

about the translation, do we have to do it literally or metaphorically? (probably metaphorically, but just to make sure)

artifact

Hmm, sounds interesting. So here goes my first try...

Through the rain - By Mariah Carey
When you get caught in the rain,          ...當你被困在雨中之時
With nowhere to run,                          ...找不到任何出路
When you're distraught and in pain,      
Without anyone.                                ...當妳獨個兒感到混亂和痛苦的時候
When you keep crying to be saved,
But nobody comes,                            ...當你不停叫喊求助, 卻沒人願意伸出援手時
And you feel so far away,                   ...你感到身在遙遠之處
That you just can't...                          ...已不能找到

Find your way home.                           ...回家的路
You can get there alone.                     ...你可以去到的
It's okay.                                          ...沒有問題的
What you say is...                              ...你要說的是...

#REPEAT#
I can make it through the rain.              ...我可以走過這片雨天
I can stand up once again.                  
On my own. And I know,                      ...我可以靠自己再次站起來, 而且我知道
That I'm strong enough to mend.          ...我夠堅強, 定能癒合.
And everytime I feel afraid,                   ...每次當我感到害怕時
I hold tighter to my faith.                     ...我更抓緊自己的信念
And I live one more day,                       ...所以我多活一天
And I make it through the rain.              ...所以我能走出了雨天

And if you keep falling down,                ...而如果你不停地下墮
Don't you dare give in.                         ...你千萬不能退後讓步
You will arise, safe and sound.              ...你會高飛, 平穩而響亮
So keep pressing...                             ...所以請努力以赴

On steadfastly,                                   ...堅定不移
And you'll find what you need,               ...你便能找到自己所要的
To prevail.                                         ...為得到勝利
What you say is...                               ...你要說的是...

#REPEAT#

And when the wind blows,                    ...當風吹的時候
And shadows grow close,                     ...黑影漸漸迫近
Don't be afraid.                                  ...別害怕
There's nothing you can't face.             ...沒有任何事你是不能面對的
And should they tell you,                     ...若果他們告訴你
You'll never pull through,                      ...你沒可能捱得過去
Don't hesitate.                                  ...不要猶豫
Stand tall and say...                           ...站起來說出來...

#REPEAT#

And I can make it through the rain,       ...我定可以走出這片雨天
And stand up once again.                    ...定可以再次站起來
And I'll live one more day,                    ...所以我多活一天
And I, I can make it through the rain.    ...所以我, 我可以走出這片雨天
Oh yes, you can.                               ...當然, 你也可以.
You're gonna make it through the rain.   ...你也會走峴這片雨天的

:: END ::

This song is to encourage people, just don't give in and give up too easy. Be strong and be ready to face any challenge and any failure. What ever happened in the future, believe in yourself, remind yourself that you can make it through the rain, keep trying, and eventually, you will be successful.

Everyone has their rainy days, so do I. And everytime when I am down and upset, I love listening to this song. And I always say to myself the same thing, that... I can make it through the rain.

...

To promote this activity, I will help giving out points after Katliang. So be active. And for those who scared of their "poor" (I don't really want to say anyone's English is poor but umm... *smirk*) English, do give it a go too, and for anyone attempted a try, I will give a point as well. *smile*


[ 本文最後由 artifact 於 06-12-14 10:50 PM 編輯 ]

秋颯

可...可是=  =
我聽的歌大部分是...
就是不是主流的歌耶！@@a

真的什麼歌都可以嗎??