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killboykakaxi91

好久沒回來了......變了還真多~
我有一個問題請教各位幫忙
我參加了一個英文比賽
然後決賽的題目是''A LETTER FOR BOGOC''
時間為一分鐘
BOGOC是奧駐委會的意思
好像是因爲大陸近年在北京舉行奧運會
可是.....我完全不知道要些什麽= =''
可以給我提一些意見嗎??
謝謝~

[ 本文最後由 killboykakaxi91 於 08-4-10 11:50 AM 編輯 ]

killboykakaxi91

我把文章打了一個草稿
希望各位大大看一下~也能幫我把錯誤指出
有幾個中文不會翻譯...希望大家幫忙
感激不敬!


A  LETTER  FOR  BOGOC
Dear BOGOC:
It is really honourable for me to write a letter to you
When it is announced that the 2008 Summer Olympic games will be taking place in Beijing
Every Chinese people are very happy and excited when they heard that,I think that they must be really proud of themselves and proud of the country.but at this moment not much people thought about who is the one who have given us this great and priceless opportunity to let us Chinese to be voted.Thats the BOGOC.Who is the one to促進奧林匹克項目在中國廣泛開展,who is the one to組織中國奧委會代表團，參加國際奧委會主辦的夏季、冬季奧運會 ,who is the one to協助其它全國性體育組織舉辦體育競賽和運動會 and who is the one to提供必要的經費和運動器材 ?Thats the BOGOC.
You have made a great contribution for all the Chinese people,and I am here to thank you thank you for all you have done we really apresiate that.Its a pity that I didn’t have a chance to be a volunteer of the Beijing Olympics but I will work harder on my English and grab my chance next time you can count on that,thank you.
                                                             Your sincerely

[ 本文最後由 killboykakaxi91 於 08-4-10 12:26 PM 編輯 ]

Katliang

A  LETTER  FOR  BOGOC
Dear BOGOC:
It is really honourable for me to write a letter to you
When it is announced that the 2008 Summer Olympic games will be taking place in Beijing every Chinese are very happy and excited. I think that they must be really proud of themselves and proud of the country.but at this moment not much people thought about who is the one whom has given us this great and priceless opportunity to let us, Chinese, to be voted.Thats the BOGOC.Who is the one to broaden the Olympic sports in China,who is the one to create Chinese Olympic club to participate in the winter and summer Olympic host,who is the one to help other countries' sports clubs to host competitions, and who is the one to suport the equipment and money?Thats the BOGOC.
You have made a great contribution for all Chinese,and I am here to thank you, thank you for all you have done. We really appresiate this.It's a pity that I don’t have a chance to be a volunteer of the Beijing Olympics but I will work harder at my English and have my chances next time you can count on that,thank you.
                                                             Your sincerely

killboykakaxi91

原文由 Katliang 於 08-4-11 03:42 AM 發表 [原文]
A  LETTER  FOR  BOGOC
Dear BOGOC:
It is really honourable for me to write a letter to you
When it is announced that the 2008 Summer Olympic games will be taking place in Beijing every Chinese are very ...

Hey~Thank you 4 the correcting!!!!!!!
It's great!!!! The competion is 2moro,wish me good luck!!